Assessment 1A
What went well and even better if yourself. Look at the mark scheme and teacher comments and also give yourself advice on what to improve for the next assessment.
Q1- Need to link back to the question more, a paragraph at the end as a conclusion would do this (17/20)
Q2- Discuss the main character more (10/10)
Q3- Need to suggest other target audiences that apply (4/5)
Q4- Explain and describe why more, specifically with oppositional audiences (5/5)
Q5- Need to write it (ran out of time)
Overall score = 36/50 (72%)
Identify strengths in your assessment?
A strength was that I was good at how to write the questions, I knew what to include and what wasn’t necessary for inclusion
What are the areas you need to improve? What will you need to focus on for your next assessment?
An area for improvement is time management, I ran out of time on question 5 and ended up not being able to write anything
Assessment 1B
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Give yourself 4 main points of advice from each of the questions you need to address in order to get full marks. Praise yourself too! WWW/EBI on each of the questions.
Remember a conclusion
Research more into case studies views. DM/guardian
Write about the language used
Have a conclusion on Q4
More examples for Q3 and Q2
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What do you need to focus on when revising for news next time? Theory? Any part of LIAR you will focus on more? Conventions/online? EXAMPLES FROM REAL PAPERS
Need to focus more on language when revising news
And focus on news values when revising too
3. What improvement will you implement in your next assessment?
I will improve on making time for a conclusion as well as comment on the type of language used in the sources